The story of a picture

I decided talk about this picture because it show the love between my cats, Olaf and Chiqui. We adopt them in two years ago, Olaf arrived with two months of life, he was the only son for six months, until january of that year came the most lovely cat in the world to keep him company.

I took this picture, one of my passions is to photograph my cats, and much more if both are together, they express peace and love. When I see his photos I remember the days in my home, when we spent whole afternoons watching movies next to the wood burning stove.

When I was a child always dreamed with have a cat, but never had the possibility because my mother hated the smell of this animal. But, when Olaf arrived, she change of opinion in 5 minutes, he stole the heart of everyone and opened the door of my house to futures cats. 

I hope in the future to have hundreds of pets, especially rescued animals and fill them with love and care.

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  1. The message on the overall is clear. However, at times, the text seems disconnected or not quite cohesive. Also, grammar mistakes turn out to be a bit misleading .

    Corrections:
    I decided talk= I decided to talk.
    it show = it shows
    We adopt them in two years ago= We adopted them two years agos.
    I took this picture, one of my passions is to photograph my cats= this phrases seem disconnected from the whole text, you may want to change it.
    with have a cat= with having a cat.
    she change of opinion= she changed her opinion.

    T: 2, L: 2, G: 2= 6 pts.
    Grade: 4,7

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